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Post by B on Feb 22, 2006 20:42:22 GMT -5
(OOC: Kevin isn't STARS. Oh and STARS is STARS not STAR then it'd just be "special tactics and rescue." without the "squad." Lol.)
"I am Claire Redfield. I'm looking for my brother Chris.. You're STARS so you should know him." Claire said as she reloaded her shotgun. She didn't seem very effected by the death, not anymore anyways. "Me and this cop named Leon are inside the station looking for a way to get out of the town. Do you know any?" She asked curiously.
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Post by alex on Feb 22, 2006 20:47:23 GMT -5
(ooc: Oh i thought he was)
"I am sorry but I have not seen your brother around here or Leon. My fellow STARS member Jack said there might be a rescue helicopter coming but besides that nothing at the moment. What are you going to do now." (It is like she went through this before, she must feel scared inside.)
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Post by B on Feb 22, 2006 20:56:16 GMT -5
(OOC: I wish I remembered all of the police station.)
"I'm going to go upstairs and see what I can find there." She said and began walking the way they came in. "Nothing is over there. Just leads back to another door to the main hall." She said, remembering the path.
Jack finally got into the STARS room. "Ok.. Sorry Wesker, but I dont think you'll be needing your desk anymore." Jack mumbled as he shot the lock off desk and opened it up to find an old file. "Damn.. I was hoping there would be a map or-.. What's this.." Jack said and opened the file and read aloud. "I parted with Birkin, he can have his little G-Virus, I'll get that in time. Meanwhile I should concentrate on my plan. I must lure the members of STARS and Sola Valance in the mansion, then I get my chance to use my creation. They shall be test subjects, just like those leeches we bisected." He then thought a bit, remembering Jill, Chris, Barry, and Rebecca coming back talking about monsters and the undead. Also talking about Wesker's death. "He had it all planned out.." Saying that Jack opened his locker and took out his revolver. He then left the room and headed for the main hall.
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Post by alex on Feb 22, 2006 21:00:27 GMT -5
"Wait don't go yet, we will go with you, since it leades back to the main hall our work is done. I wish to find jack and you want to find Chris and Leon. I help you and you help me. It is better off if we all stay together." (Her shotgun might come in use)
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Post by B on Feb 22, 2006 21:03:11 GMT -5
Claire nodded and began walking until she was halted by slime. "Eww.." She said and looked up to see a licker. She began beathing harshly and backed into the others. Mark got his bent pole ready in case and Kevin aimed at it's head but none of them could do anything because of the crowding hallway.
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Post by alex on Feb 22, 2006 21:09:20 GMT -5
(Those thing are really ugly)"Everyone back into the room, we need more space to kill this bastard." Mez tookout his handgun however it was so crowed that he could not get a clear shoot. Remembering how powerful those things are Mez realized the shotgun is the best bet to kill this thing. "Claire when you get a clear shot take it. These things are super strong. When we were on the way here we met tons of them. Jack fired a couple shots in one of the heads of these beasts and they did not die. Make sure the shot counts." He slowly backs into the room.
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Post by B on Feb 22, 2006 21:13:30 GMT -5
(OOC: Terry's got a point. When you think just use 'you think' ok? Some people on here use () as an OOC instead of putting OOC. No worries, they cant count this against you at the rating because I forgot to tell you so it was my fault.)
The others followed. Claire kept a good eye on the beast then had a shot. The thing seemed to have predicted the shot as it jumped from the cealing to the wall and slowly showed it's slimy teeth. Again Claire fired, this time she blew the head apart. "Whew.." She said and continued down the corridor, stepping on the beast as she did so.
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Post by alex on Feb 22, 2006 21:18:46 GMT -5
(ooc: I should have known better it is not your fault, I will change to these then *)
*Those things are not normal, How were they made this all makes no sense.* "That thing dodge you're first shotgun blast, No wonder they were keeping up with the car. Let's head to the Main Hall first to see if Jack is there then we will go upstairs." Looking at this creature as he passed, it looked like it's blood was green.
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Post by B on Feb 22, 2006 21:21:20 GMT -5
Suddenly alot of shots were heard coming from the main hall. "STARS!" An eerie voice was heard. The thing making that voice had a black trench coat on, a minigun in his right hand and a rocket launcher in it's left. Jack was pinned down, he didn't even know when he was going to be blown to peices by the rocket launcher. The thing seemed intent on securing enough ammo for a certain someone whom he has been chasing this whole time.
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Post by V on Feb 22, 2006 21:23:34 GMT -5
Boy I sure hope this doesn't happen again...well, here goes nothing...oh and Kelly, I'd watch yourself if I were you....
Note: I'm not gonna rate like the meanie guy right now...seen enough today...*eyes flash to Kelly and back*
Anyway, Improvement definitly shows, though last problem was run-on sentences, now it's cutting them to short. That's not much of a hit, but having to be reminded kinda deducts it slightly more. Other than that, not much else...maybe the other judges can spot mistakes I missed, because I'm WAY to lazy to read every post....
You pass on my scale: B
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Post by alex on Feb 22, 2006 21:25:19 GMT -5
"what was that" Mez ran in front of the group and burst through the doors, he was taken back by the creature that had Jack pinned down. The thing had a huge rocket launcher and machine gun. "Holy Hell, Hurry up guys we are goining to need all we need to take this thing down." He pointed his gun right at the creature and fired hitting him in the head with no effect. "How are we supposed to beat someone who is invincible."
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Post by B on Feb 22, 2006 21:31:11 GMT -5
"STARS!" The thing yelled as it pointed it's gun at Mez. "Alex! Get down!" Jack yelled as the enormous barrel of the minigun began to spin quicker and quicker. This was now a sign that the gun was about to fire.
(OOC: Sorry couldn't think of nothin.)
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Post by solavalance on Feb 22, 2006 21:31:54 GMT -5
Honey you passed with flying colours well with me. I say your in. Do well and remember take everything we say as advice.
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Post by B on Feb 22, 2006 21:32:43 GMT -5
(OOC: I already say yes. If you're interested Alex we can continue.)
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Post by alex on Feb 22, 2006 21:34:20 GMT -5
right when the thing started shooting mez dove left to avoid the bullets. "That thing is unstoppable." He was scared more then ever, those lickers were like fly's compared to that amount of power. "Why does he keep on saying STARS. I quess he really hates us."
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